31/05/2026
What I did in May, now with one click fewer!
I published a new edition of my newsletter yesterday. It includes a free sci-fi short story called Postcard from Sunday. If you want to read the story, just subscribe to the newsletter by going to http://eepurl.com/_5EDX . You'll also get to read all the previous stories for subscribers. (Full disclosure: some of them are also in Racing the Storm and Other Stories, though they were exclusive to subscribers when I posted them.)
The novella that I mentioned last time (with the working title of Dreams of Demons) is coming along nicely. I've written over 10,000 words this month, so the first draft now stands at 27,500 words.
I submitted the first two chapters to my critique group, and the consensus was that I've managed to start too late and too early. How so? The story is about the protagonist investigating a mystery (could I be any more vague?). He knows what the mystery is, and has a fair idea of what kind of answers he's looking for. But I don't reveal this until chapter 2. Chapter 1 is him travelling to the place where the mystery has happened. I did this because it's an unfamiliar environment, and the details of it will be important later. But the reader doesn't know that yet, so there doesn't seem to be anything at stake in chapter 1. I either need to delete chapter 1 and work any relevant information into the rest of the story, or write a new scene before chapter 1 where the protagonist (or the reader, at least) finds out about the mystery. But this is what the second draft is for.
I haven't done anything more with the audiobook of The Last Dragonrider. I've been spending a lot of time at my Dad's house, away from all my recording equipment, keeping an eye on him after he came out of a stay in hospital. He can mostly do what he needs to do day-to-day, but he can't walk much, and gets tired easily, so I do a lot of his fetching and carrying. It's just as well I work from home - all I need is reliable wifi and somewhere quiet and comfortable to sit.
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