07/23/2026
Head Hopping: Good? Bad? Something Else?
Head hopping allegedly occurs when a writer begins a scene from the point-of-view of one character, only to "hop" to the point-of-view of another character. Most English and creative writing instructors would condemn such "hopping." I'm not so sure. When it comes to the concept of head-hopping, I have a cartoonist's advantage. Working in multiple panels, I can draw two characters, provide an accumulating dialogue as the story advances one panel at a time, and supply my characters with exaggerated facial expressions and body language to communicate outward emotions and inner thoughts....
Head hopping allegedly occurs when a writer begins a scene from the point-of-view of one character, only to “hop” to the point-of-view of another character. Most English and creative wr…